Does your story keep readers turning the page? Is your manuscript, query letter, or synopsis as strong as it could be? Not sure? I’m here to help.

Mini Critique


  • Comments throughout your pages focusing on: pacing, character development, language usage, style consistency, point of view, tone, theme, show vs. tell, awkward phrasing, & more.

Designed for:

  • Opening pages polish
  • Short stories
  • Novellas 80 pages or less
  • One-act critiques from your full MS

Comprehensive Critique


  • Mini Critique line comments
  • Comprehensive critique letter (Up to 10 pages covering: character development, worldbuilding, pacing, plotting, & more.)
  • One-hour phone/Zoom consult

Designed for:

  • Full MS critiques

75 page minimum for Comprehensive Critiques

Synopsis Critique


Query Critique


  • Includes two passes. Allowing you to revise & resubmit for a second round of edits.

Specializing in: Middle Grade, YA, Fantasy, Science Fiction, Creative Non-fiction, Literary, & Memoir. All genres welcome except: Romance, Erotica, & Horror.

*All page estimates are based on standard manuscript formatting at 250 words per page. ​ Sample edits available.

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